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Julianna666: какой мой стих лучше по вашему мнению? Sometimes it seems Sometimes it seems that life’s unfair It makes you fall and crawl to stay alive It breaks your heart and your empire That you build your entire life Does this living worth your pain? Does it deserve your tears becoming rain? Where is the shelter from regret’s flame? There is no cure for the feeling of blame Sometimes it seems that life’s unfair It rips your heart in pieces and sets the fire Now and then again and again it makes you cry The pain flows in your veins making you want to die Does this living worth your pain? Does it deserve your tears becoming rain? Where is the shelter from regret’s flame? There is no cure for the feeling of blame It always seems that other people have it easy And hate, pain, envy are freezing Deep inside your broken soul And you always look for who has the fault Does this living worth your pain? Does it deserve your tears becoming rain? Where is the shelter from regret’s flame? There is no cure for the feeling of blame Same situations How to break wicked circle of same situations That are so painful and left you behind Feeling so empty and without sane mind When your lost pieces cannot be found Those situations are always the same They repeat and appear to be worse than it used to be They make you run same circle of path again Blinded by pain and regrets you are not able to see It just happens and leaves you with feelings so hollow As you know they will always follow And that knowledge sets inside the horror’s fire To find new way is that what you really desire As time goes by you feel that there is nothing you can do You fight, you cry, you are silen, but that doesn’t help, too It seems that others cannot see that you are slowly dying As they continue screaming, hurting, fighting Alone Lost inside my little broken world Your one sentence was like sharpest sword That went straight into my deepest core You were the one I was living for You went away without even looking back You left me bleeding, crying for you I fell on my knees and everything went black I didnt know anymore what should I do I'm lost without you I cannot breathe, I stumble At the moment I lost you My heart became numb Time passes by so slowly Healing my wounds step by step I just think about you mostly Remembering the time we met I count our days and weeks Remembering all that we did together And now I count days and weeks That I have spent alone Every minute feels like an hour Every hour feels like a day My love bloomed into a death's flower But I must go through my way ALONE
Ответов - 3
Tyra: Все голосуют за русский вариант, а мне больше нравиться англиский. Молодчинка,обалденные стихи Проголосовала за ALONE, уж очень он мне близок!!!
ERETIK: Alone лучшее по ритму..а в Sometimes it seems классный припев
Julianna666: спасиииибо
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